Rap-tor, Defender of the Universe

[BarkingTreefrog]

Just a dino I've been working on for a friend. It is far from done yet. Any comments or suggestions are more than welcome. Oh and just so you know, it is meant to be a little cartoony.

[groodwanderer]

I would maybe lengthen the tail and round out those calves.

[Zombat]

The teeth are a little too symmetrical and all the same. It'd probably do the dino some justice if you changed the teeth around so there is some variance.

the legs need a lot of help. the calves are too muscled out, and there isn't enough transition between the lower and upper leg. And as said, the tail needs to be longer.

[Dave3D]

I really like the arms, they very well made. It really needs them eyes. the legs dont look perfect ether. Also i think the tail could be longer and go to more of a wippy end, it looks a little T-rexy at the moment.

Good job so far keep us posted.

Dave;)

[hrgiger]

Also, the teeth look a little flat. They might be round, but they come to too much of a point. I'd round off the ends a bit more.

[BarkingTreefrog]

Thanks for the comments guys.

The legs are meant to be overly muscular. We are going for an exagerated cartoony look. As for the teeth, I agree. I will work on those. And it does look too T-Rex-y. I think it may be because his body is too large for the rest of the dino. I will keep you posted on updates.

[BarkingTreefrog]

Here is the lastest. I've added a few things and changed some more. Let me know what you think. As always suggestions and comments are welcome.

[Max Wolf]

you might want to make the iiner claw longer and curved
and a bit bigger