asian nude lady

[otonasi]

hi all
I made nude asian lady that my latest work

please comment so i'm happy

my englesh so poor couse please very simple sentence

[Zarathustra]

Eyes too far apart.
Eyebrows are strange. They don't conform to shape of skull and eye socket.
Lips too thin.
Not enough space between nose and mouth.
Clavicle incorrect.
Armpit seems strange.
Shadow at top of breasts make them look like impants.
Ears questionable.
Eyelashes too evenly spaced and too short.
Strange ring around irises - possibly incorrect refraction of cornea object.

Texturing is a good start.

[otonasi]

Zarathustra and thank you.
Your opinion is heard, and it builds in detail and is crowded.
Thank you very much.

Since there is no WIP of LW, it is very lonely in my country.

[Jure]

Zarathustra has spoken!

And I might just add that her teeth are way too small, and therefore too many of them.

[SamuraiSlayer]

I think you have done good at showing the face of an asian woman. I would comment on some things but first I would want to know if you want it to look real or do you want it to have some character?

Do you speak Japanese?

Good Luck

-SS

[otonasi]

hi Jure thanks a lot
your opinion herad and i made big teeeth
Isaw your home page and your cgi is good work !

hi SamuraiSlayer thanks you
your english little difficult

http://www2.asahi.com/koshien2003/ne...0307140193.jpg
Her is model

yes I can speak japanese

Should this picture be stuck on WIP

thank you all

[SamuraiSlayer]

ボンソワール

私が試みる私の残念な日本語

現実的か。 漫画か。 どれか。

左様なら



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Good Evening

I'm sorry about my bad Japanese, but I'm trying.

Do you want it realistic or cartoony?

Goodbye



-SS

[Zarathustra]

Let's save the other languages for PMs, ok?

Yes, I suppose this should be moved to WIP.

Could you post a front and side view? Even just screen captures would be fine. That will help in evaluating her anatomy.

Thank you for acknowledging my comments are to help and not insult.

Keep going, you're doing well.

[SamuraiSlayer]

Originally posted by Zarathustra
Let's save the other languages for PMs, ok?

Zarathustra: If my speaking Japanese helps him better than English, then I'll speak Japanese, until one of the moderators tell me I can't. I'm using the best way to explain what I see is wrong on his model.

Otonasi:
今日は

ご心配なくよいフォーラムの場所

テキストの表示はか。

左様なら

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Hello

Don't worry about which forum you posted in.

Does the Japanese text display right?

Goodbye

[digimassa]

Originally posted by SamuraiSlayer
I think you have done good at showing the face of an asian woman. I would comment on some things but first I would want to know if you want it to look real or do you want it to have some character?...

I also think so, if she should show character the first picture is better then second, eg eye distance was very nice,

and I also cannot read japanese but i think its kind from Samurai to help in this lanquage as

Originally posted by otonasi ... your english little difficult...

[Zarathustra]

SS: This is an open forum. If you want to convey a message JUST for otanasi to read, then PM him. There are others who follow this thread and may benefit from what's said, even from your comments. It's inconsiderate to them posting in a foreign language. Obviously, this is an English speaking forum.
If you feel compelled to post in Japanese, please, as a courtesy to the other members, duplicate in English.

[SamuraiSlayer]

Ok fair enough i edited and copied it into english



-SS

[digimassa]

"Who are the brain police? " Frank Zappa

[otonasi]

My late reply because my job so busy and i'm tired
And now i'm not bad condition
all your reply thanks you

SamuraiSlayer thanks a lot
your japanese text so kind ,i understand your opinion
I want to make to real like a photo
My skill is low
But I like manga Evangelion, Doragonball, Ghost in the shell
IF my all image is influenced manga

Zarathustra thnaks
your opinon is accurate
I grew up

digimassa thanks you reply
I will do that best

I will be start that studying anatomy, texturing, lighting, and so on

thanks all reply im so happy
see your later

[MorituriMax]

Yowsa.. if ya wanted to make it look like a womans chest on a mans body, I think it came out great.. perhaps more feminine shoulders, arms, stomach, head would work.

Other than that good work.