Old 05-29-2005, 09:21 AM   #1
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WIP: Character "ROBOT"

Hi to everybody,
I am working to a new project with possible animation.
I am modeling this robot with lightwave 8.2.
I accept gladly criticisms and suggestions.

thanks
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Old 05-29-2005, 10:54 AM   #2
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Very Very nice.

About the only thing I can suggest is that the neck is a bit busy - looks to me like there is too much stuff there, so it bulges out at the back.

But overall really, really good.

How much detail do you plan to add with texturing?
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Old 05-29-2005, 06:22 PM   #3
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hi starbase,
will I hardly end the model with further details, sparrow' to the textures, do I think that the lighthouse' of metal consumed you that you say?

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Old 05-29-2005, 06:28 PM   #4
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Hi,
have I started to model the legs with the joints, that you think of it?
for the feet I don't have a precise idea of as to do them yet you as you would do them?
Naked'?, with war boots?, sexy shoes?

talk to you soon
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Old 05-30-2005, 04:56 AM   #5
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I think this is fantastic! I actually like all the detail in the neck.

Keep the updates coming

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Old 05-31-2005, 03:29 PM   #6
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Starbase is right, those (vertbrea) are a distraciton to the flow of the rest of the mesh. Too Big. If anything make them smaller or remove them. The rest looks very good.
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