Old 07-04-2003, 03:35 PM   #1
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swallowtail papilio machaon

I modeled this butterfly based on the swallowtail papilio machaon.
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Old 07-04-2003, 03:36 PM   #2
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trying again
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Old 07-04-2003, 03:37 PM   #3
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Old 07-04-2003, 03:39 PM   #4
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maybe someone can tell me how to post multiple pics in one message...
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Old 07-04-2003, 05:56 PM   #5
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Nice texture work, has the felt looking thing that butterflys have. however nasty stretching on the edges of the wing, this a UV map, if its not I suggest using one next time, if it is then you need to tweak it.

also the model looks way to ridged, bend the body round a bit, make the creature look alive, not just a platic model placed on the glass.

to post multiple images, you will need to host them on a website and then use the image tags (up above the write message bit) to show it.

also size prehaps a bit big, I am 56k tho!
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Old 07-04-2003, 09:31 PM   #6
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Beleive it or not this is my favourite butterfly.
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Old 07-05-2003, 08:49 AM   #7
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Nice concept, nicely executed.

A couple of suggestions - not sure why, but the stem looks a bit fake in some shots, a bit too insubstantial. Maybe crank up the reflectivity, or specular?

Also I think the main part of the glass at the top looks a bit thick compared to the rest of the design, maybe a bit chunk for the image?

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Old 07-05-2003, 09:30 AM   #8
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thanks, rei. I fixed the UV to kill the edge stretching. And the first pictures I posted where rendered before I added bones or weight maps, which is why it was so stiff. I rigged an Ik on the wings, with motion mixer to control flutter speed.
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Old 07-05-2003, 10:03 AM   #9
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I don't like the glass material or the lighting at all (burning) and I'm considering only the butterfly.

I'm not sure which papilio machaon you are modeling, as I told you this is my favourite butterfly, and I tought the insect color and shape look more like this:
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Old 07-05-2003, 01:54 PM   #10
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I based the model on these two pictures. The body of the butterfly was based on the swallowtail papilio machaon, where as I cheated a little on the shape and color of the wings. The wings are more based on the anartia amathea, because they where easier to model and texture. I think your the only one that acually noticed.
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Old 07-06-2003, 11:09 PM   #11
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Old 07-07-2003, 12:26 AM   #12
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Nice!, you kept the characteristic red dot of the machaon.
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